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I have a Work In Progress. It's a swan. The one swan on the left is the current version. The one on the right was the previous. Am I changing it for the best or the worst? Is there anything I can try to incorporate?

[img]http://i26.tinypic.com/208zfol.jpg[/img]

Thanks in advance, Luke.

Update, close up of recent version:

[img]http://i28.tinypic.com/2jes311.jpg[/img]

very nice!
i think its getting better.

Anything I could maybe fix or add, Joshua?

it looks pretty cool as it is.
although, im not quite sure if it is possible but mabey you could add a tail and loads of pleats in the wings.
ps. will there be diagrams? if so, ill fold it

[img]http://i28.tinypic.com/20f6rkl.jpg[/img] New version.

Wing change. Feet narrower, Inside reverse for tail, colour change on beak.

What do you think?

awesome!!
well done!
will there be diagrams?

It has improved from the first one you made. Color change in the beak is a nice addition.

Btw, do you also have a photo from a bit up so we can see the top of the wings, curious if there are also color changes in there.

The whole top of the wings is red. And there may be diagrams after I am finished with the tweaks.

Green is new swan from the same base. Red is the newest version of the WIP.

Shows wing details.


New Swan


Details:


EDIT: The green one still has a colour change on the beak.

Also, which is better? green or red? I can always refold the red one so it's better crafted.

imo the green one is better

Okay, I have finished the green one totally. Perfected it. Of course Joshua, when I make the diagrams you will be first to fold it. Okay, now to finish the original...

great!!
i cant wait to fold it!

Starting the diagrams for the green one now.....

FINISHED THE DIAGRAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They may be hand drawn and look like prehistoric drawings but they'll do for now until I have more time to do a good draft. Reply if you want the diagrams.