Hi josh, just here to give some advice.
It is true that your folding has improved, but your efforts are not gonna help much if you use 10cm sheets to fold complex models.
I have folded quite a few models from quentin's book and have learned hard lessons from using sheets too small. I have used similar paper as you, 40 cm tissue foil (the origami shop version) and 35cm tant, and these papers often don't meet the recommended size. Though some difficulties were apparent, and in certain cases, the models looked subpar, they didn't look horrible, despite my poor folding skills.
However, using 10cm sheets is a different story all together. Tant and tissue foil are not exactly very thin medium and using a 12cm sheet for the mermaid, 10cm sheet for the giraffe and equally miniscule sheets for the elephant are not helping.
If you are trying to fold minigami, first perfect the origami model on larger sheets, than fold it small on the tiny sheets, but making sure those sheets are really thin, like mc tissue or double tissue.
@Littlezilla: f course, i knew that. I was just testing myself to see how small i could fold them.
And your folding skills are not poor, they're awesome
I'm pretty sure that Joshua said earlier that he was trying to contact Nicholas Terry and sell it on his site, but I dont think he really knows yet. (Sorry for taking your response Josh!)
I like the paper that you used for the elephant. Verrrrry furry. What is the paper?
I'm putting it all together now. Final price is £10.99 because there are only 11 models. I've been working on it all day today and will be tomorrow aswell.