Help with fixing this model

[JumPurge]

I got the hands down. But the eyes are more on the side than the front.

Basically, diamond shaped square. <> Like that I guess... bottom corner, the lower mouth (just pleats). Same with the top. Only I folded parts up to make the eyes. Then the sides were spiked to give it the haunter look. But... it still doesn't look like haunter.
Haunter (just in case people don't know, I know lots here do know but, hey, never know):


http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=haunter ... 0#/d20s0y4
(You can find this papercraft at nintendo papercraft for download if you like cutting... a lot)

[Sroge4]

Hmm... Try making it spikey-er, and less of a rounded shape.

[JumPurge]

Any suggestions for doing so?
I can figure out how to get spikes in without doing something similar to La Fosse does with his butterfly wings (pleat then corner tuck x2 to get something like this -v-).

[Sroge4]

Sorry, I'm not very experienced at designing. If you're using T-foil (which it looks like you are) you could just pinch the paper into spikes.

[JumPurge]

It's double tissue.
And... I don't take your advice for granted, but if you're not a designer... then you're not really fit to give advice on designing much, or fixing them. :/
People who are probably skilled at designing can probably see the design flaw in this and help me fix it... ><;

Because I know to a degree to add spikes (la fosse like I said). It's not that hard. Making less round... yeah that makes sense from the pictures now that I think of it...

[Sroge4]

I think as someone viewing your model I have just as much right as anyone to say what I think is wrong with it.

Although you're probably right that there are others more qualified than me to tell you how to actually go about changing it.

[JumPurge]

I wasn't thinking about the observer opinion, apologies.
I tend to drive towards people who I know what their talking about so I don't get skrewed over in the long run. I'm sure you know the whole gag routine with tech supports

[Sroge4]

Haha I understand completely

[JumPurge]

Now my main issue is moving the eyes forward ><

[Fluffy]

Try little pleats to move them maybe? Is there a cp or diagrams??

[JumPurge]

Mm, not really, but here's a sketch.

I don't want to make a CP now because it's so rough and almsot no ref points. Most is just halves...


It's not actually folding the top flap down, you're actually folding i t a little above the the bottom quarter to make a parted mouth.