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Re: Joshua Goutam

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haha.
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orislater wrote:this is extremly off topic but you have to watch this! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pzNHInwimuk
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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Re: Joshua Goutam

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Very rough draft of a crab.
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it has personality. i like it.
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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graet job on beefier claws
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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Thanks Arun and Sebastian. It s a completely different design than the earlier one. It still needs work though, any suggestions?
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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I don't really like how the eyes come from that bottom section (you asked for suggestions), but it looks pretty good.
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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I'll try to fix that.
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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A suggestion for your crab model is to not make it looked like a stuffed crab. I see some of your models and think, "Wow they are looking good", but then other ones like the crab seem super thick and seem like you rushed. Try to get all the folds to go down on each other so you get a thinner look model. It sort of looks like a stuffed pita.

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Re: Joshua Goutam

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Why not? Stuffed crabs are delicious :) For your constructive criticism, I think (though maybe it would make them too short) to stretch the legs out and crimp them to look more like a crabs armor!
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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The final fold will be neater so the model shouldn't look that thick. I'll try to stretch the legs some more.
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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Haha I like it. To me it looks a little bit like some cartoon crab and that's good ;)
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I like the legs the way they are. It is one of the features that really adds to the model, a little bit of whimsy that really gives it character and gives the claws an impression of beefiness.
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Re: Joshua Goutam

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I'll make it more realistic when i refold it. ;) I'll see what looks best for the legs.
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