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ibex diagrams - finished and ready to test!
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may i test??????????
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Post by Razzmatazz »

No offense Joshua, your final drawings in your diagrams make the model look un-satisfactory.
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trouble: sorry, i already have 2 test folders. i'll let you test fold one of my next diagrams :)
razzmatazz: i also think the same about this one, i'll change it today. :)
what other diagrams were you referring to?
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here, i made the final image look better. :)
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I reccomend one thing: Use reverse/ valley folds for the legs instead of squishes, they don't look good on diagrams and for that matter, the real model itselg. You could use 3d folds (what I usually do), but i feel you should use reverse folds as it fits the clean style of your antelope.
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yeah, that can easily be obtained, but i think it looks better like this. :wink:
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Tree Frog designed and folded by me
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and in comparison to the old one.....
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full colour change at the bottom.
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Post by origamimasterjared »

Sorry Josh, but that new frog looks really bad. I think you should focus on other things to design. Or if you are going to do a frog, at least do something different than trying to imitate Nicolas' and Kamiya's. Sorry, but at the moment you simply can't compete with them.

And the underside is worse. There is way too much extra crap for that underside to be viewable. Yes, you managed to color-change it, but at what expense? There's nothing wrong with having it only look good from one side, but you shouldn't promote your model's bad side.

Sorry to be so negative, but this is one of the worst designs I've seen from you in a long time. And the extremely messy tissue-foil folding doesn't help.
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well, ok.
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Post by origamimasterjared »

Sorry, I know it hurts. You've been doing so well, and this is not up to par with your recent work.
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i actually like this one quite alot. but if thats what you think, then thats fine :)
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Post by joshuaorigami »

since i recently ot some standard origami paper, i tried a hand at desiging some simple models. its actually really tough!

woodpecker
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a bird (not sure what species)
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polar bear
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whale
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Post by garrasdecaiman »

yeah it´s not kamiya (well nobody is, exept him) but I really like the tree frog
nice color changes, toes and everything!
although I like the long middle toes of the first one better
it´s cool
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garrasdecaiman: Thanks!
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