W.I.P: Swan

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 2:36 am

I have a Work In Progress. It's a swan. The one swan on the left is the current version. The one on the right was the previous. Am I changing it for the best or the worst? Is there anything I can try to incorporate?

[img]http://i26.tinypic.com/208zfol.jpg[/img]

Thanks in advance, Luke.

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 2:40 am

Update, close up of recent version:

[img]http://i28.tinypic.com/2jes311.jpg[/img]

joshuaorigami · Post by **joshuaorigami** » July 26th, 2010, 8:44 am

very nice!
i think its getting better.

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 6:01 pm

Anything I could maybe fix or add, Joshua?

joshuaorigami · Post by **joshuaorigami** » July 26th, 2010, 6:15 pm

it looks pretty cool as it is.

although, im not quite sure if it is possible but mabey you could add a tail and loads of pleats in the wings.
ps. will there be diagrams? if so, ill fold it

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 7:36 pm

[img]http://i28.tinypic.com/20f6rkl.jpg[/img] New version.

Wing change. Feet narrower, Inside reverse for tail, colour change on beak.

What do you think?

joshuaorigami · Post by **joshuaorigami** » July 26th, 2010, 8:00 pm

awesome!!

well done!
will there be diagrams?

FlareglooM · Post by **FlareglooM** » July 26th, 2010, 8:41 pm

It has improved from the first one you made. Color change in the beak is a nice addition.

Btw, do you also have a photo from a bit up so we can see the top of the wings, curious if there are also color changes in there.

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 9:59 pm

The whole top of the wings is red. And there may be diagrams after I am finished with the tweaks.

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 26th, 2010, 10:10 pm

Green is new swan from the same base. Red is the newest version of the WIP.

Shows wing details.

New Swan

Details:

EDIT: The green one still has a colour change on the beak.

Also, which is better? green or red? I can always refold the red one so it's better crafted.

joshuaorigami · Post by **joshuaorigami** » July 27th, 2010, 8:38 am

imo the green one is better

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 27th, 2010, 2:39 pm

Okay, I have finished the green one totally. Perfected it. Of course Joshua, when I make the diagrams you will be first to fold it. Okay, now to finish the original...

joshuaorigami · Post by **joshuaorigami** » July 27th, 2010, 3:05 pm

great!!
i cant wait to fold it!

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 27th, 2010, 6:34 pm

Starting the diagrams for the green one now.....

Razzmatazz · Post by **Razzmatazz** » July 27th, 2010, 8:46 pm

FINISHED THE DIAGRAMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They may be hand drawn and look like prehistoric drawings but they'll do for now until I have more time to do a good draft. Reply if you want the diagrams.